Morena Bloggers,
This week in Te Waka Ako we were learning how to make a narative story. Each day we read the first slides to gather our information. The second thing we had to do was to create our own animal to include in our story. I named mine Pao as it will say in the story. Then a few days later we started our first drafts. At first I didn't know how to start my story so I had to get a bit of help. The next day I made sure I had the right capital letters and puntuation. Today our job was to finish our story and blog it!... Here is a link to what I have been working on through out this week. Hope You Enjoy!
Bonjour Lily. You’ve made a great plan around your characters, with a theme of kindness. Ka pai! I can’t find your published work, but maybe it’s this one on slide 11. It’s good that you have included that Pao was feeling sad, upset, nervous and excited at various times. Can you add description about Jake so that the reader can understand how he was feeling? I wonder what Pao’s new setting really looked like?
ReplyDeleteBravo on your great narrative. I’m looking forward to seeing how your writing reaches the next level in the future with even more detail. Keep up your awesome efforts. Enjoy a fun weekend with your family, hope the sun shines!