In class I have been writing a report about something I like. I decided to write about dogs because I have a dog. First I planned my big idea then I researched for the information I needed. Then I wrote each paragraph about each new idea.
Please read my report and leave me a comment about what I could improve.
Kia ora Lily it's Brax. I really like the part about the four legs because it reminds me about dogs running fast. One question, is that your dog in the photo?
ReplyDeleteHola Lily. I love your writing because it has many facts I never knew. Something you could improve on is punctuation marks and put them in the right spot. How do you know so much about dogs? From Cyan.
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